DiwaWin — The Second Invitation
DiwaWin

DiwaWin — The Second Invitation

Fictional story · Characters and events are part of the narrative.

The wedding invitation arrived in a box larger than the stock of pens Adil had sold that morning. There were sugared almonds, a strip of embroidered cloth…

The wedding invitation arrived in a box larger than the stock of pens Adil had sold that morning.

There were sugared almonds, a strip of embroidered cloth and a card thick enough to stand on its own.

His name had been written by hand.

For a moment, he forgot the unanswered messages.

Then he found the folded order sheet beneath the card.

Four hundred gift boxes. Printed inserts. Ribbon. Delivery to the hotel on Friday.

Payment after the wedding.

At the bottom, Rishabh had written: Adjust everything together. You know we're family.

Adil read that line twice.

Rishabh still owed him thirty-eight thousand four hundred rupees from an event six months earlier.

Apparently family had remembered his address.

* * *

They had been friends since college.

Back then, Rishabh borrowed Adil's notes, forgot his lunch money and arrived at exams with a confidence Adil found both irritating and useful.

Rishabh's family had money. Adil's did not have much.

For years, neither of them had made that the most interesting thing about the friendship.

They had shared a room during a college trip when the hotel lost a booking. Rishabh had visited Adil's father in hospital without turning the visit into a favour he could mention later. Adil had helped Rishabh move after an argument at home.

There had been reasons to trust him.

At thirty-four, Adil ran a small stationery and packaging shop with help from his wife, Saba. He sold notebooks, envelopes, printed cards and the kind of gift boxes people wanted to look expensive before asking why they cost so much.

Rishabh worked in the family business.

They saw each other less often.

When he called Adil six months earlier, he sounded like the old friend who needed something solved quickly.

A supplier was holding back printed material for a launch party until its balance was paid.

Rishabh's payment approval was delayed.

Could Adil cover it for two days?

* * *

Adil paid the supplier directly.

He kept the receipt and sent it to Rishabh.

The answer came with three folded-hands symbols and a promise to repay on Monday.

On Monday, the accounts person was away.

On Thursday, the transfer had supposedly been entered.

The following week, Rishabh stopped answering calls during working hours.

Adil tried evenings.

Then he tried not calling at all for a few days, as if giving the friendship room might help it remember what it owed.

At a mutual friend's birthday, Rishabh greeted him warmly in front of everyone.

When Adil mentioned the money outside, the warmth vanished.

“Do we have to do this here?”

“Where should we do it?”

“I'm getting married. There are expenses.”

“I have expenses.”

Rishabh looked towards the doorway.

“You've become very transactional.”

Adil went home repeating that word.

He had paid somebody else's bill without a contract because he trusted his friend.

Now asking for the money back was the thing that had made the relationship commercial.

* * *

Saba spread the wedding order across the shop counter.

She did not say she had warned him. She had not. At the time, both of them had thought two days meant two days.

“How much would we have to put in?” she asked.

They calculated materials, printing, labour and transport.

The number was larger than Adil wanted to see.

“If they pay everything afterwards, it clears the old amount too.”

Saba looked at him.

“If.”

He suggested using the money they had saved for her visit to her mother, replacing it as soon as the wedding payment came.

Saba pushed the order sheet away.

“You've already spent that money twice in your head.”

He began explaining that he was looking for options.

“So am I,” she said. “Mine includes not cancelling my plans to protect his.”

They had not argued when he paid the old supplier. Now the cost of that decision was reaching into a trip she had been planning for months.

Adil looked at the train dates written on their calendar.

He crossed the proposed borrowing out of the calculation.

“Your trip stays.”

She nodded. Neither of them mistook that for a gift he was giving her.

Outside, a schoolboy pressed a coin against the glass and asked for a pencil. Adil sold it, sharpened it because the child asked, and returned to the calculation.

The ordinary sale took less than a minute.

Nobody suggested that requesting payment made him greedy.

He sat down behind the counter and wrote a quote for the wedding order. It required a materials deposit before production and the remaining payment before dispatch.

He listed the old amount separately.

Then he sent the quote to Rishabh.

He placed the invitation in a drawer.

He did not put the almonds out for customers.

* * *

Rishabh called within twenty minutes.

For the first time in weeks, finding time had been easy.

“What is this?”

“A quote.”

“I sent you an invitation.”

“And an order.”

“You're treating my wedding like a business enquiry.”

“The boxes are a business enquiry.”

There was a pause long enough for Adil to hear somebody speaking in Rishabh's office.

“Fine. Do the boxes. I'll make sure the old amount is included.”

“Deposit first.”

“You think I'll disappear?”

“You stopped answering.”

Rishabh exhaled as though Adil had said something embarrassing in front of guests.

“You know what? Leave it. I thought you'd want to be part of this.”

Adil held the phone tightly.

He did want to be part of it.

He wanted the friend who had sat beside his father's hospital bed. He wanted a wedding invitation that did not contain instructions to lend more money.

He said, “I won't start without the deposit.”

The line went dead.

* * *

The losses came in small calls.

A regular customer from Rishabh's family circle found a different printer.

Another asked for a discount that made the job barely worthwhile, then said Adil's attitude had changed when he refused.

A third told Saba, with the kindness people use when delivering something cruel, that one should not forget who introduced one to good clients.

Saba wrote down the cancelled orders.

Adil watched her pen.

By the end of the week, the shop felt smaller.

He stood in the doorway one evening and could hear music from a nearby wedding venue. He wondered whether Rishabh was there, laughing with people who had already heard a simpler version of what happened.

At home, he opened photographs from college.

He found one of them sitting on a bus roof at a stationary roadside stop, waving at a friend below. They looked unbearably certain that being close would make the future straightforward.

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He closed the photograph before Saba came in.

Then he opened it again and showed her.

“I miss him,” he said.

“I know.”

“I still won't do the order.”

“I know that too.”

* * *

The shop had survived thin months before.

This one was different because Adil kept confusing lost customers with evidence that he had been a bad friend.

He underquoted two jobs before Saba caught the figures.

“Are we selling boxes,” she asked, “or asking people to like us?”

He got angry.

Then he apologised.

They reviewed what actually sold, what sat on the shelves and which orders cost more effort than the price allowed.

Saba suggested contacting nearby offices that bought small quantities regularly rather than waiting for one enormous celebration.

Adil visited a coaching centre, a repair business and a local catering company with samples.

Two said no.

One asked him to come back when the manager was there.

The fourth place ordered printed paper sleeves in a quantity small enough to produce without borrowing.

The customer paid the agreed deposit before Adil asked twice.

He stared at the notification, then called the supplier.

Work began.

The catering manager rejected the first sample because the dark border made the small lettering difficult to read. Adil had spent most of the previous night preparing it and wanted to defend the design.

Instead he asked which details customers needed to see first.

They went through the sample together.

He made a simpler version. It used no special ribbon and none of the expensive touches that Rishabh's family always requested. It worked better for the customer's purpose.

When the manager approved it, Adil felt a satisfaction he had not had during the wedding calculation.

Someone had asked him to make something useful. He had listened, changed his work and been paid for it.

He took the rejected sample home and showed Saba the difference. She suggested keeping both for the next meeting, so other clients could explain what they preferred.

It was not dramatic enough to tell anyone at a wedding.

It helped pay the electricity bill.

* * *

Teen Patti had been his Friday-evening recreation for years.

He played with an adult group in a room above a friend's shop, and sometimes entered local competitions when there was spare money and time.

During the difficult month, he stopped going.

Saba asked why.

“I should be here.”

“The shop closes at eight.”

“I can sort stock.”

“You sorted it yesterday.”

He said nothing.

She looked at the piles of envelopes that had been rearranged three times.

“Two hours away won't fix this,” she said. “It might stop you taking it out on the paper.”

He went.

He played badly and spent too long talking about the wedding.

An older player finally said, “We believe you. Now either play or help make the tea.”

Adil laughed despite himself.

He helped with the tea.

The following week, he returned without bringing the invitation story into every pause.

The room became useful again because it was not his shop and nobody there needed gift boxes.

* * *

A small regional event was announced three months later.

Adil entered with money he had set aside for leisure before the wedding order. He checked that the shop's suppliers were covered before paying the entry fee.

He did not tell himself a prize would repair the business.

There were new orders to deliver whether he won or lost.

On the morning of the event, he nearly stayed behind because a batch of printed inserts arrived misaligned.

Saba held one up.

“We can trim these.”

“It'll take time.”

“Yes. I'll do the first half. You do the second tonight.”

He stood at the counter with his bag.

“What if I don't make it back early?”

“Then you do it tomorrow morning. Go.”

He kissed her forehead. She pushed him away because her hands were covered in paper dust.

At the venue, the first person he saw was a man who had cancelled an order after the argument with Rishabh.

The man asked how business was.

“Busy enough,” Adil said.

For once, he did not add an explanation.

* * *

He played better than he expected.

Partly because he was not checking whether anybody important had noticed.

The early stage passed in ordinary decisions. He recovered from a poor stretch, reached the closing session and found himself close enough to the lead that the final exchanges mattered.

During a break, Saba sent a photograph of the corrected inserts stacked neatly beside a cup of tea.

No message.

Adil smiled and put the phone away.

At the end, he finished first.

The prize was one lakh rupees.

He looked at the confirmation, then at the time.

The shop would still be open.

When he called, Saba answered with a price because she thought he was the supplier returning her earlier call.

He said, “Wrong customer.”

“What happened?”

“I won.”

She was silent.

Then she said, “Good. Your half of the inserts is still waiting.”

He laughed loudly enough that the scorer looked up.

On the journey home, he did the figures in his head and then stopped.

The money would make a difference.

He wanted to arrive home before turning the whole evening into arithmetic.

* * *

They used the prize after it was paid, along with income from the new work, to settle a supplier balance and replace the small cutting machine that had begun ruining corners.

They kept part aside for ordinary costs.

The shop did not become fashionable overnight.

There were still quiet afternoons and customers who wanted a price reduced because they had “only a small function.”

But the new catering client ordered again.

The coaching centre that had first refused them came back for folders.

A nearby clinic bought plain envelopes without asking for a friendship discount.

Saba made a simple order form so dates, quantities and payments were clear before work began.

Adil used it even for people he liked.

Especially for people he liked.

He discovered that most reasonable customers did not find clarity offensive.

Some found it reassuring.

The orders came in different sizes from different people.

No single invitation could make all of them disappear.

* * *

By then, Rishabh's wedding photographs had been online for weeks.

Adil saw one by accident and then looked at several on purpose.

The boxes in the pictures were gold.

They were fine.

That hurt in a small, ridiculous way. He had wanted them to look terrible so that refusal would be rewarded by an obvious failure.

Instead, the wedding looked lovely.

Rishabh looked happy.

Adil put down the phone and went to help a customer choose notebook covers.

He could have been right to refuse and still miss the day.

Both things remained true.

The unpaid amount did not vanish. Adil continued sending a clear statement of what was owed, with the supplier receipt attached, through the family's accounts contact.

Months later, the principal was repaid.

The message came from the accounts assistant.

Rishabh did not call.

Adil acknowledged receipt and closed the entry.

Saba asked whether he felt better.

“About the money.”

“And the rest?”

“Not everything has an accounts column.”

She nodded and handed him another order to check.

* * *

The second invitation arrived a year after the first.

It was for an anniversary dinner hosted by Rishabh's family.

The envelope was smaller.

Inside was a card and an enquiry for two hundred gift boxes.

This time there was no instruction to begin immediately.

There was a request for a quote, a delivery date and an advance payment once the details were agreed.

Rishabh's mother called the next morning.

“Will you take the order?”

“Yes, if we can confirm the quantity today.”

“You're still very formal.”

Adil looked at Saba, who was sorting ribbon at the other end of the counter.

“It helps us deliver on time.”

The woman paused.

Then she asked about colours.

They discussed colours.

For fifteen minutes, nobody called a credit arrangement family.

After the quote was accepted, the deposit arrived.

Adil checked the amount.

Then he placed the materials order.

The system worked without anyone being humiliated into trusting somebody.

* * *

Rishabh called two days before delivery.

This time Adil answered without rehearsing.

“Mum says you're doing the boxes.”

“Yes.”

“Good. Listen, come early for the dinner. We can catch up. There'll be people you should meet.”

Adil ran his finger along a folded edge, checking whether the paper had cracked.

“I'll have the order delivered at the agreed time.”

“I mean you. Come before the guests. Help us make sure everything looks right.”

There it was: friendship arriving with another job in its pocket.

“Setup isn't included,” Adil said. “If you need it, I can quote for that separately.”

Rishabh gave a short laugh.

“You really have changed.”

“Yes.”

The answer left a space neither of them filled immediately.

Then Adil added, “The boxes will be ready.”

Rishabh asked whether he would at least stay for dinner.

“No. Thank you for inviting me.”

He meant both sentences.

That was new.

* * *

Delivery went exactly as arranged.

The family paid the balance before dispatch. Adil checked the cartons with his assistant, counted the inserts and sent the driver with a copy of the order.

He did not ride along.

At closing time, Saba asked what he wanted to eat.

He suggested the little restaurant they kept walking past without entering because there was always one more job.

She checked the counter.

“There will still be jobs tomorrow.”

He put the second invitation in the file with the paid order.

The first invitation was still in the drawer.

He took out the almonds, long past any reason to keep them, and threw them away. The ornate card went with the old personal papers he would sort later.

He did not need a ceremony.

At the restaurant, a waiter asked whether they were celebrating.

Adil looked at Saba.

“Just dinner.”

She raised her glass.

“That's allowed.”

His phone lit up with a photograph from the anniversary party. The gold-and-cream boxes looked exactly as ordered.

He checked that the delivery confirmation had arrived.

Then he turned the phone face down.

Across town, people were opening things his shop had made.

Here, he was having a meal he had chosen.

For once, the two did not need to be the same occasion.

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