SVIP 777 — The Last Bus Wouldn't Wait
SVIP 777

SVIP 777 — The Last Bus Wouldn't Wait

Fictional story · Characters and events are part of the narrative.

At nine twenty-four, Rohan put his notebook in his bag. The last bus left the stop at nine forty. He needed twelve minutes to walk there. Vikram looked at…

At nine twenty-four, Rohan put his notebook in his bag.

The last bus left the stop at nine forty. He needed twelve minutes to walk there.

Vikram looked at the clock above the practice-room door.

“Sit down. We haven't reviewed your mistakes.”

The other players began gathering their things.

Rohan pointed towards the door.

“I told you when I joined. I have to catch—”

“We all have lives.”

Vikram said it pleasantly. That made it harder. There was no shouting to object to, no obvious scene for anyone to interrupt.

Rohan sat.

The review took seventeen minutes.

Six of them concerned a hand he had not played.

When Vikram finally closed the score folder, Rohan ran.

At the stop, a man was rolling down the shutter of a juice stall.

“Gone,” he said.

Rohan bent over with his hands on his knees.

The man did not need to say which bus.

* * *

He lived beyond the ring road, where the city seemed to end several times before actually ending.

At twenty-seven, Rohan worked in a packaging unit near the industrial estate. His mother stitched blouse linings at home. Between them, they managed rent, groceries and the irregular expense that always arrived wearing the expression of an emergency.

He had played Indian Rummy since his late teens, first with relatives, later in adult practice groups. He liked the concentration it demanded. For an hour, the problem in front of him had edges he could see.

The city club offered stronger sessions and a team pathway into competitions.

It also stood on the wrong side of the last bus.

Before joining, Rohan had explained his travel limit. Vikram, the captain, said sessions usually finished by nine fifteen.

“Plenty of time.”

For three weeks, that was true.

Then Rohan began asking questions.

Why was one player's late arrival ignored while another lost practice points? Why did the captain's friends receive the first choice of tables? Could the records be shared after sessions?

Vikram called him a serious young man.

The phrase began sounding less like praise.

* * *

On the first night he missed the bus, Rohan waited beside the closed juice stall and checked the cost of a ride home.

More than he had planned to spend on food for two days.

He called two drivers. Neither agreed to the amount he could afford.

His mother rang.

He said the bus was delayed.

That lie was easier than hearing her offer to send money from the envelope marked for the electricity bill.

A security guard at a nearby warehouse let him sit beneath the awning until an early workers' service began in the morning.

Rohan did not sleep properly.

At six, he reached home, washed his face and changed for work.

His mother was standing by the stove.

She looked at his shoes, then at his eyes.

“Next time, tell me.”

He nodded.

At the unit, he misread a carton code and had to redo half a stack. The supervisor was irritated but fair. He made Rohan take a break before continuing.

By lunchtime, Vikram had posted the practice scores.

Beside Rohan's name was a deduction for leaving without finishing the session.

* * *

Rohan sent a message.

I stayed until the review ended. I missed my bus.

Vikram replied in the group.

Commitment isn't measured by public transport.

Several people added laughing reactions.

One sent a bus emoji.

Rohan stared at the small yellow vehicle until it stopped looking like a joke and became an exact picture of everything they did not have to think about.

He wrote a longer answer, then deleted it.

That evening, he called Vikram privately.

“I can't do that again.”

“Then manage your time.”

“The session went past the time we agreed.”

“Do you want special treatment?”

“I want to leave when the session is meant to finish.”

Vikram said serious players did not watch the clock.

Rohan looked at the clock in his kitchen. His mother was due to return a customer's stitching in twenty minutes. His next shift began at seven.

Every serious thing in his life required watching the time.

He did not know how to explain that to a man who treated it as weakness.

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* * *

The second missed bus was deliberate enough that Rohan could no longer pretend otherwise.

At nine twelve, Vikram said the main work was done.

Two players who drove were allowed to leave.

At nine eighteen, when Rohan stood, the captain announced an attendance check and a short individual review.

Rohan waited through three names.

Then Vikram took a phone call.

At nine thirty-one, Rohan picked up his bag.

Vikram held out the score sheet.

“Leave now, lose your place for the next team event.”

Rohan looked at the other players.

One examined his phone. Another stared at the table. A third gave the tiny apologetic smile people use when they want you to understand why they are doing nothing.

Rohan stayed.

He missed the bus again.

This time he did not wait beneath the warehouse awning.

At the closed stop, he took off the club badge and put it in his pocket.

Then he called his mother and told her the truth.

* * *

A woman sitting on the low wall beside the stop heard the part about the club.

“Vikram?” she asked after he ended the call.

Rohan looked at her.

She lifted a cloth bag with a familiar club logo, turned inside out.

“I used to go.”

Her name was Farah. She was thirty-one, worked at a diagnostic centre's reception desk and lived three stops before him.

She had come from a different practice group that evening. A delayed session had cost her the bus too, though she said that group usually apologised when it happened.

They found a shared ride travelling along the main road, but Rohan was short of the agreed fare.

He began putting his phone away.

Farah paid the difference.

“Sixty,” she said. “You can return it.”

He was grateful she gave it a number.

During the journey, she told him she had left Vikram's club when access to practice began depending on being available whenever he pleased.

“You don't have to stay just because leaving makes him call you unserious.”

Rohan watched the road pass.

He had been waiting for someone inside the club to say that.

* * *

He repaid Farah the following afternoon.

Then he wrote to the club office.

He explained the agreed finish time, the delayed reviews and the penalty entries. He asked for his own attendance record to be corrected and said he would no longer take part in the team programme.

The office acknowledged the message and later removed one inaccurate departure entry after checking it. It did not rebuild the whole programme around him.

Vikram sent a separate reply.

Some people prefer excuses to improvement.

Rohan did not argue.

For several evenings, he came straight home from work and felt as though he had surrendered.

The empty hours were not immediately peaceful. At eight thirty, he would think of the club tables. At nine fifteen, he would imagine everyone improving without him.

His mother put dinner in front of him.

“Have you stopped playing?”

“I've stopped going there.”

She nodded.

“Those sound different.”

He had not yet worked out whether they were.

The next morning, Farah asked if he wanted to look at a room near the bus interchange.

* * *

The room belonged to a small community association.

It was plain, warm and available two evenings a week. The tables did not match. One tube light hummed. The rent was low enough to share.

Farah had two other adult players interested. Rohan knew a colleague who sometimes practised.

They agreed on a finish time before choosing a name for the group.

Eight fifty.

At eight forty, they would stop beginning anything that could run late. Unfinished reviews could continue in writing or at the next session.

Nobody would lose attendance credit for catching agreed transport.

They also planned earlier weekend sessions when possible.

On the first evening, Rohan kept checking the clock.

Farah noticed.

“You've got time.”

He nodded but checked again.

At eight forty-nine, one player began explaining a complicated point. Farah asked whether it could be written down for next time.

The man said yes.

They put away the cards.

At nine seventeen, Rohan sat on the bus with his bag on his knees.

For several stops, he did not quite believe there was nothing left to apologise for.

At home, his mother asked whether practice had been cancelled.

“No. Finished.”

She moved the pan off the flame and told him to wash his hands. While they ate, she described an argument with a customer about a sleeve. He listened instead of pretending to listen while fighting sleep.

Then he told her about a mistake he had made at the table. She did not understand the game well enough to advise him, but she understood that he wanted to talk.

He helped clear the plates.

The next morning, his alarm felt like an alarm again, not a punishment.

* * *

The new arrangement was not automatically excellent.

Rohan and Farah disagreed about how much practice needed recording. One member missed two sessions without informing anyone. The buzzing light failed on a rainy evening.

They dealt with those things separately.

A late reply was not evidence that someone lacked ambition. A difference of opinion did not mean one player owned the room.

Rohan brought a replacement tube after the association approved it. Farah made a simple schedule. The absent member apologised and decided that weekends suited him better.

The group adjusted.

Their play improved unevenly.

Sometimes Rohan returned home pleased. Sometimes he spent the bus journey replaying a mistake until Farah asked whether he wanted to discuss it or merely stare at the window.

Both answers were allowed.

One evening, he found her searching every compartment of her bag for her fare purse.

He took sixty rupees from his wallet.

“Keeping it for emergencies,” he said.

She laughed.

“Try not to turn this into a family tradition.”

* * *

An independent qualifying event opened entries that winter.

The published schedule ended early enough for their usual journey. Both entered as individuals. Neither needed approval from a club captain.

They checked the terms, the entry costs and the procedure if the event overran. Rohan arranged a modest travel backup before paying.

Farah did the same.

This preparation did not make the game safer from disappointment.

Rohan lost badly in one qualifying session. He returned to the waiting area with his shoulders high and a sentence ready about wasting everybody's time.

Farah handed him his lunchbox.

“Whose time?”

He looked at her.

“You played your session,” she said. “Now review it.”

He did.

By the end of the qualifying rounds, both had advanced.

That evening, he reached home before his mother finished stitching.

She looked at the result message, then at the clock.

“So these people can run a competition and finish?”

Rohan laughed.

Apparently, they could.

* * *

Vikram saw them at the final venue.

He wore the club shirt, crisp and bright, with two players behind him.

For a moment, Rohan felt like someone caught leaving school early.

Vikram looked at Farah, then back at him.

“Bus partnership?”

Farah asked Rohan whether he had found the registration desk.

He pointed.

They walked towards it.

Behind them, Vikram said that some players would never get beyond small arrangements.

Rohan heard.

He also heard the volunteer ask his name and confirm that his registration was complete.

He chose which conversation to answer.

The first day was long, with ordinary delays. The organisers posted revised times when necessary. Rohan did not love the waiting, but information made it manageable.

Farah qualified for the final session.

So did he.

Vikram did not.

Rohan learned that from the standings rather than a dramatic announcement. The world did not arrange a moment for him to enjoy it.

He had his own next table to find.

* * *

In the final session, Farah sat across from him.

The woman who had once covered his fare was now an opponent with a real chance of finishing ahead.

Rohan found that oddly comforting.

Their friendship did not require either of them to play gently.

They followed the rules, concentrated and made their own decisions. Farah read him better than he liked in one stretch. He recovered later. Another player led for a while.

Nothing about a missed bus guaranteed a good result.

Near the end, Rohan made a mistake and felt the old panic: somebody would decide this proved he should have stayed at Vikram's club.

He glanced at the clock.

Not to escape.

To see how much time remained for the work actually in front of him.

Then he returned his attention to the table.

The final scores took several minutes to verify.

Farah finished third.

Rohan finished first.

She reached across to shake his hand before he had worked out where to put it.

“Now you can buy tea,” she said.

“Sixty rupees' worth?”

“Don't become difficult.”

* * *

The presentation ran later than the revised estimate.

At nine ten, Rohan asked the event coordinator how long the remaining formalities would take.

The man checked.

The award photograph could happen immediately. The detailed interview was optional and could be scheduled another day.

Rohan agreed to the photograph and arranged the interview for Sunday.

No one deducted points.

No one told him that gratitude required missing the last bus.

After the photograph, a club acquaintance caught him near the door.

“Vikram wants a picture with you.”

Rohan looked towards the presentation area. The captain was speaking to someone beside the sponsor board.

“I'm leaving,” he said.

“It'll only take a minute.”

Rohan had learned that a minute could be an estimate, an order or a test.

He checked the clock.

“Tell him he can send any request in writing.”

He and Farah left together.

They did not run at first. Then, at the crossing, the pedestrian signal changed, and both hurried because they wanted to get home.

Nobody behind them called their names.

* * *

They reached the stop at nine thirty-six.

The juice-stall owner was stacking empty crates.

He looked at the trophy in Rohan's hand.

“Won something?”

“Yes.”

“Good. Bus hasn't gone.”

That second piece of news pleased Rohan almost as much as the first.

When the bus arrived, they found two seats together.

Farah sat by the window. Rohan put the trophy on his knees, angled so it would not knock the seat in front.

He sent his mother a message.

On the last bus. Won.

She replied with a photograph of a covered plate on the table.

The conductor came down the aisle. Rohan paid his fare, then offered to pay Farah's.

She let him.

There would be other chances to keep accounts without turning them into debts.

As the bus moved beyond the brightest part of the city, his phone lit up with congratulatory messages. One was from Vikram.

Always knew you had potential.

Rohan read it once and put the phone away.

Beside him, Farah had closed her eyes.

He steadied the trophy when the bus crossed a rough patch.

At her stop, he woke her.

Then he continued towards home, where the food was still warm enough and nobody would ask him to prove how badly he wanted to belong.

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